I really adore the internal conversations as each of them tries to come to terms with their own personal wants and needs. You have really caught these characters in all their adolescent glory: they love each other, but they're still essentially centered on themselves.
Once again, Spike's plan might have failed, but his ability to improvise is still alive and healthy, and this time maybe he'll have a little more interest in the boy. After all, Spike is alone and hurting now. Yep, I'm fairly well dying for the next part. Would bribes work?
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I really adore the internal conversations as each of them tries to come to terms with their own personal wants and needs. You have really caught these characters in all their adolescent glory: they love each other, but they're still essentially centered on themselves.
Once again, Spike's plan might have failed, but his ability to improvise is still alive and healthy, and this time maybe he'll have a little more interest in the boy. After all, Spike is alone and hurting now. Yep, I'm fairly well dying for the next part. Would bribes work?