Thanks hon. It has changed a lot from that rough draft. It's amazing how much work it took to change it, too. My style must have grown since I wrote it, because just about every sentence was somehow slightly wrongly put together - those that were actually there *g*

I'm pleased that Jesse feels real. I don't know why, but I always felt he had the attitude of a middle-ish son in a big family. Something about the way he acted, in the little we saw of him.

Thanks. Sweet but achy is good.