ext_211639 ([identity profile] smwright.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thismaz 2007-11-05 10:44 am (UTC)

*smiles* You really know how to lay it on, don't you?

Willow had been too busy trying to accommodate both of them to express a preference of her own. Have to admit to a certain amount of self-reflection here. *g*

This is lovely. Xander was just ripe for Spike's meddling, and for once, Spike wasn't heavy handed with it. Played beautifully.

Again, I have to comment of the (not distracting) greater powers you accord the vamps than Whedon did. It's a nice touch when that comes into play in your stories. Here, particularly, where Spike senses Angel just on the edge of conscious awareness... very nice.

Now, it seems, you have a plot. Can't wait to see where it leads!

Well done, love.

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