Very well executed, hon.
Thank you, you are too kind. I have gone back and edited it a bit, to knock some of the rough edges off.
Angel and his hair was something I really couldn't resist. Angel trying to warn Xander... well, that was never going to work. I think his motives were right. It's what underlies his motives that I worry about. *g* The thing he really doesn't want to face.
The next chapter will be up in a moment and is the last of the 'set-up'. Hopefully the pace will pick up after that.