"that didn't diminish the rush he'd got from the kill." The minute I read that bit, I thought, hang on, since when does this big broody Angel get a rush from a kill, and it made me wonder what was coming next.

Lovely description of Angel's subconscious. As always your descriptions just glow with life.

And I was right - last week, Spike did dress Xander up as Jeb to mind fuck his Sire, and here he's doing it again! I love that Spike really rubs salt in Angel's wounds by admitting that he wouldn't have thought of turning Xander if Angel hadn't been panting over him - ouch!

Nice to see some well chosen dialect, it kept Jeb so much in character in Angel's mind while Xander was doing naughty things to his body. And Xander has obviously learned a thing or two since he was turned!!!

Really gorgeous chapter, hon. This is just going from strength to strength.
s x