ext_1461 ([identity profile] darkhavens.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thismaz 2006-08-14 05:23 am (UTC)

Thank you so much for sharing this at [livejournal.com profile] bloodclaim. I hope you continue to keep us up to date as you post the sequel 'Road Trip'.

I just read 'Observations' from beginning to end and loved every minute of it. I vaguely remember reading the first chapter - I 'recognised' the other couples in the club - but I have no idea where I saw it and now I'm juggling three fandoms I have no chance at all at remembering if I've already given you fb on it.

Tiny edit point - You have used the word 'bum' a couple of times while in Xander's headspace, and that did jar slightly - it's a Spike word and Xander would be much more likely to use 'ass' instead.

I look forward to seeing more from you soon!

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