ext_211639 ([identity profile] smwright.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thismaz 2008-09-28 03:00 am (UTC)

he needed to choose a strong mate for his young

There are so many great bits in here where you play up the biology of what was going on with Xander that day, but I just pulled that one out because it made me chuckle. This is, of course, what we pack animals do. *g*

Poor Xander. He really did get a whammy that day. Loved the way you explored that internally here, which we didn't get to see on the show. This was so well executed.

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