ext_7308 ([identity profile] trepkos.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thismaz 2009-08-12 07:32 am (UTC)

(he talked as we walked down the street)

I think that would be better the other way round - "As we walked down the street, he talked." "As he sat down, he cried out."
Hmm.

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