Thank you. I had got to the point where I couldn't work out what sounded right because it was and how much right because I'd been thinking about it too much.

You're probably right *goes to look again* I kind of typed it from memory and in my head I always pause between the lines. I'll fix that. Not sure why I put in the colon. I don't actually like them much - too authoritarian. *g* (is rebellious, occasionally)

Edited because that typo just didn't make sense and to add - I've changed it and the commas are debatable, but I'm leaving them. *g*