ext_15304 ([identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thismaz 2006-09-04 12:14 am (UTC)

Oh god... this is such a painfully wonderful little piece. The way you use language is amazing. "waiting for Jack. Beautiful Jack. Jack of the promises..." guh. I could practically feel her pain in that. And the visuals... and the end. So tender. God I'm glad you joined us!

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