which had led to some of his greatest successes, like holding Angelus to ransom, as well as some of his more ignominious disasters, like parent teacher night or holding Angelus to ransom. Oh, God, I love it!
Yes, Angel was a pain and Spike was evil, and Dru was just scary, but she was their family and in their ways they obviously loved her and mourned her loss. Again, you've done such a lovely job of showing Xander's struggle as he comes to terms with who has been honorable and who hasn't in this case.
When the bell rang, Xander halted the lathe and removed the half formed bowl, putting it carefully aside. Was this intentional? The allusion to Xander's half-formed self slowly taking shape in halts and starts?
And truly my favorite line of the week: It might be the right thing to do, but it wasn't noble. True of so many things we choose to do... right and proper but ignoble nonetheless.
This is just a beautiful protrait of each player's indiviual weaknesses and flaws. I really enjoyed the early portions as they flowed one after the other. Then, the finale with its plot-propelling encounter between Giles and Spike still managed to move your story along - all with an incredibly difficult prompt. Very nicely done! Give yourself a hearty pat on the back, my girl, because this may have been the toughest week yet.
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Date: 2007-01-28 01:34 pm (UTC)which had led to some of his greatest successes, like holding Angelus to ransom, as well as some of his more ignominious disasters, like parent teacher night or holding Angelus to ransom.
Oh, God, I love it!
Yes, Angel was a pain and Spike was evil, and Dru was just scary, but she was their family and in their ways they obviously loved her and mourned her loss.
Again, you've done such a lovely job of showing Xander's struggle as he comes to terms with who has been honorable and who hasn't in this case.
When the bell rang, Xander halted the lathe and removed the half formed bowl, putting it carefully aside.
Was this intentional? The allusion to Xander's half-formed self slowly taking shape in halts and starts?
And truly my favorite line of the week:
It might be the right thing to do, but it wasn't noble.
True of so many things we choose to do... right and proper but ignoble nonetheless.
This is just a beautiful protrait of each player's indiviual weaknesses and flaws. I really enjoyed the early portions as they flowed one after the other. Then, the finale with its plot-propelling encounter between Giles and Spike still managed to move your story along - all with an incredibly difficult prompt. Very nicely done! Give yourself a hearty pat on the back, my girl, because this may have been the toughest week yet.