So much foreshadowing. Oz and friends as cool kids Xander envies. Jesse chasing Cordelia to Xander's ewws. Interesting twists you have in here. I think this may be one of the first times I've seen the take that not all was well between Xander and Jesse before the end, that they were, in fact, growing apart but it makes so much sense based on the scanty canon evidence.
Willow looking at Xander differently and Xander's fear she might pull away as well is also very interesting. I hope you continue this.
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Date: 2007-09-29 08:16 pm (UTC)Willow looking at Xander differently and Xander's fear she might pull away as well is also very interesting. I hope you continue this.