Date: 2009-10-03 06:29 pm (UTC)
That hallway scene was vividly drawn, and I'm with Spike in being surprised that The Initiative would shoot in a hall filled with students. They have little concern for the people they're supposed to be protecting.

Xander's antsiness about getting to the site manager was entertaining, as was his Anyaesque ogling of the orange t-shirt guy. I loved him taking charge and leaping into that hole after the man fell, too. Does this mean he won't be the one to contract magical syphilis?

This was a wonderful sentence: The soldiers moved with a sureness of foot that suggested night-vision goggles, which put them on an even par with Spike and all of them emperors in the kingdom of the blind. The sure footed amidst the panicked students painted a vivid picture.
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