You caught the bleak, hopeless tone of the first World War very nicely. Beautiful small portraits of various characters along the way. This was a very good mood piece.
Never apologize for writing original fiction! But do be aware that putting it on lj limits your ability to sell it later, should you choose to do so.
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Date: 2006-09-03 02:18 am (UTC)Never apologize for writing original fiction! But do be aware that putting it on lj limits your ability to sell it later, should you choose to do so.