Oh sweetie, you made me cry. To use the prompt word, that was pitch perfect. The language was precise and delicate at the same time and the images it evoked made me see this life through her eyes.
Loved the ref to the boat coming in, and the line about Jack almost broke my heart. And Bernadette at Christmas was a lovely touch.
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Date: 2006-09-19 02:58 pm (UTC)Loved the ref to the boat coming in, and the line about Jack almost broke my heart. And Bernadette at Christmas was a lovely touch.
Beautiful, subtle and sad. Bravo love.